Super quick write

Hi today I will be sharing my quick write with you. I am very proud of my quick write, and I think that it I one of my best quick write that I have ever done. That is why I have decided to share it with you.

From somewhere within the walls of green that surrounded him, he heard footsteps approaching slowly and purposefully, and it began to dawn on Carl that he was not alone at all,...''h,hello'' trembled Carl is anybody there.There was a moment of silence, all that could be heard was thewistling sound of the wind struggling throw the small gaps in between the leaves.''I know your there, said Carl, he was trembling more and more by the second. Come out no wait don't come out,say something, no wait don't say something. No just,just stay there.Carl took a deep breath.Right before having something thrown at him nocking to the ground as he...

I hope you liked my quick write. Bye

Storybird Picture Book

This is my Picture Book that I made on Storybird.com for quick write today.  It is about a hedgehog's messy room and his mum said that if he doesn't clean his room that a monster would come, but he still did not clean his room.  So his mum played a trick on him.  But I do not want to spoil the story!
Read down below to find out what happens.