This is my Picture Book that I made on Storybird.com for quick write today. It is about a hedgehog's messy room and his mum said that if he doesn't clean his room that a monster would come, but he still did not clean his room. So his mum played a trick on him. But I do not want to spoil the story!
Read down below to find out what happens.
Hi Izzy, I just love this story you have written! It has humour, a hook and a nice twist. You listened to feedback and have made good use of the speech marks. I look forward to reading your next Storybird picture book!
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